Job, like marriage and child education is considered as an eternal topic discussed by nearly all individuals. And some people believe salary level is the sole determinator in hunting for the job. They claim the aim of undertaking job is income generation. Although the factors such as training opportunities and personal interest are important, they cannot replace the position of payment level in determining whether to accept the job offers. And it is the action of chassing for the higher payment that is in line with the primary purpose of work. All other factors as they believe can only be valuable when the requirement of high payment is filfulled.Nevertheless, this view has been challenged. As others believe that job which is considered as the essential component of people's lives cannot be determined solely by the salary level. Some high income earners are currently working under high presures and their healthy condition have become big concerns. And if this situation is continued, some serious problems would be triggered including some serious psychological and physical deseases. Thus, what they believe is all fectors ranging from career development to job satisfaction should be comprehensively taken into consideration for seaking a decent job.In my view, payment is an important but not the only factor in job seeking. Other factors such as whether the job is in accordance with the personal goal should also be considered. And only by doing it, can we select the most decent jobs for ourselves. 这是我的版轿哗轿本，我觉得芦铅大概6分吧。你第一段可以稍微简单一点闭肆，毕竟这只是一个开头。把主体段落扩充一些。还有就是注意一下语言的简洁
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